Wednesday, December 3, 2008

Draft four

"Can you beleive they're actually selling these for ninety nine dollars?!" Janet exclaimed to Maxene as she held up a pair of Levi Blue Jeans. "That's nothing, I saw a pair over in the corner, for a hundred and fifty nine." Maxene replied, they'd been a pair of black jeans, with diamond studs running up each leg.
"Let's just leave this place." Janet said as she put the jeans back onto the rack.
"But I found some pretty cool stuff, beside's there;s a sales rack we can check out at the back of the store." Maxene suggested pointing towards the end of the store, where thier where a sign with the words Fifty percent off was hung in the back of the store. "Hopefully I'll find a decent pair of pants." Janet replied as she headed towards the sales racks ahead of Maxene. "I'll be with you in a few, I'm going to check out the new skirts." Maxene called after her. "Okay." Janet said, with a slight wave of her hand.

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