Friday, December 5, 2008

Draft five

"Where is Maxene?" Mr. George asked, "She's at the mall with her friend Janet." Mrs. George replied, she was stirring a pot of soup on the stove top. "Did she send out her college applications yet?" Mr. George asked, as he leaned against the kitchen counter. "I don't know, you can ask her when she gets back to the mall." Mrs. George replied, "You know it's really important, she get those applications sent out before summer vacation." Mr. George contiued. "I know,and I'm sure she knows that to." Mrs. George assured him, as she contiued to stir the soup in the pot, ontop of the stove.
"Do you know when she'll be back home?" Mr. George asked, he was anxious to talk to Maxene about college. College he beleived would be one of the biggest and most important steps of her acadademic life. "I told her to be home by eight thirty." Mrs. George replied

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